Scenes I've got to get out of my head
Sat, Sep. 20th, 2008 02:37These are going to be as short as I can get away with, just enough to let me spin down and GO TO SLEEP. They aren't organized because 1) I took Tylenol PM hours ago, and also because they belong in works-in-progress that haven't progressed to the point where this bit should appear. Grammar is bad, spelling is unchecked, and I'm particularly unhappy with the flow in the middle bit.
Cuts go here:
( Are those orders, by any chance, printed on a flimsy? )
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Of course, it'd be easier on Doc if one of his patients were a clone variant. Cleaner chromosomes. Fewer weird biological responses to medications.
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( Watch me get into trouble. Didn't they have something like this on an episode of Danar's holovid? )
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and of course, whenever I focus on one campaign, another character pops up with loose sentences and scene-fragments:
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( Rissa )
Cuts go here:
( Are those orders, by any chance, printed on a flimsy? )
(((
Of course, it'd be easier on Doc if one of his patients were a clone variant. Cleaner chromosomes. Fewer weird biological responses to medications.
)))
( Watch me get into trouble. Didn't they have something like this on an episode of Danar's holovid? )
(((
and of course, whenever I focus on one campaign, another character pops up with loose sentences and scene-fragments:
)))
( Rissa )